Episode One Edit: Complete!

I feel so accomplished today! At last, I finished editing my first chapter so that it can match the rest of the story's epicness! As I went through the unedited version, I felt kind of sick to my stomach. I realized that THIS was the reason my story isn't getting many views, favorites, or comments. The first chapter as it was, in my opinion, literally crappy, and I apologize for such crappy writing. I assure you, I will do much, much better, as you will see if you reread Episode One ^_^
Also, I'm quite proud of the new title I came up for it!
Thank you so much to all my readers for continuous motivation! I love you all!