Restarting the story · 2:08am Feb 5th, 2017

Hello guys, Valence here.

I'm sorry to say that due to personal distaste with my first story, I'm deleting it.

I've been trying for a while now and nothing's clicking. I don't really know where to go here. All I do know is that I created this story without brainstorming and completely threw my overexcited mind into it.

That being said, however... I am restarting the story. It's going to be different, but I am still making Will the main character. I just couldn't think of a way for the story to continue correctly. I had a plan, but I burned myself out. I think I'm going to try to approach this story a bit differently...

Will's character was all over the place and I didn't realize it until it was too late. I'm not very good at characterization; I hope to become better, though. I also didn't like how much of a swear-a-holic I made Will in the first two chapters. I'm defiantly not doing that again. Please bear with me, it's been a tough school year and I finally feel like I've regained some free time. Thank you for all your feedback and I promise I will have a good story if it kills me. I'm also going to try to make smaller chapters (Like 5-8000 word-ish) instead of larger (10,000+ word) chapters. I really just didn't have the time to write this well. I'm hoping for a better outcome.

In the meantime, however, I have been able to start a few side projects that I'll post when I feel like it...

Stay sparky!

~ Valence

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