I finally started writing a story!

Well, more accurate I am writing a story with my good friend. You can find it on our joint account here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358644/the-twisted-paths-of-spirits-and-mares

Please let me know what you think.

Comments

[Gammia the Shapeshifter]

Looks like a good beginning. I like the writing style so far, and didn't notice any major errors. Got a definite follow from me. I look forward to seeing more.

[Mister Morden]

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Thanks! If you do notice any errors, please let us know.

[Gammia the Shapeshifter]

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Will do! I didn't notice any typos or grammatical errors on my first read through, so that is good. The exposition felt a bit awkwardly done, but not bad. I will read it through again tomorrow, and see if I can come up with any suggestions.