New tear jerker

Hey guys I posted a new story. of course it is another sad one, because i am ungodly depressing. I don't really like this story, but I couldn't get it out of my head so I went ahead and wrote it. once again give me honest criticism, so I know how to better my stories. also thanks to Xz Hacker for editing

Edit: lol I just realized that I probably shouldn't have posted this until the story is approved