Changes to chapter 2 · 9:20pm Feb 1st, 2012
Sorry about changing the chapter, but it had to be done. After having someone read it they found some mistakes that made it a little less suspenseful and enjoyable than I had hoped, so I went back into chapter 2 and reworked the section in question. If you would like to read it now and see the (hopefully) more suspenseful version of chapter 2 then I urge you to do so.