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DeejayShuffle


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  • 374 weeks
    Pretty Much Dead.

    Welp. I was afraid this would happen. Then again I guess it's been "happening" for a while now. I've done no new writing. I was looking at trying a whole new draft of DOE, but I just gave up. Not that interested in MLP anymore. Consider my fimfic dead until further notice.

    It's been fun!

    Happy Reading,
    DeejayShuffle

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  • 378 weeks
    MIND. BLOWN.

    1000.
    ONE THOUSAND.
    ONE FREAKING THOUSAND!

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  • 380 weeks
    Feeling better!

    Boo! Took ya by surprise huh? I've been doing better as of late, maybe because January is over. January was a strange month for me, kinda felt like the Twilight Zone.

    I'm sorry, I just had to. That pun was too easy of a target.

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  • 380 weeks
    Losing Interest.

    Things aren't doing so hot in the writing department. I've lost interest in Fimfiction, and really MLP as a whole. I haven't been writing for a while now, just meandering around Fimfiction once a day. I'm not sure when I'll get back into it, if ever, but stay posted and I should pipe up again in the next 10 days or so. Thank you for following my crazy writing journey and supporting all of my

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  • 382 weeks
    Plans Underway

    Plans for a reboot of DOE are underway. It's really more of a spiritual successor, because the characters and plots are very different, they just used DOE as a jumping off point. Don't leave just yet! If you liked DOE, than you're sure to love this one, as it's everything that made DOE good, but polished to perfection. The pacing is going to be better, the chapters will be more descriptive, and

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Oct
7th
2016

DOE information / Fed up with imports · 8:48pm Oct 7th, 2016

Okay, this is the companion blog to DOE chapter 5, because some things need explaining. Mainly the frequent use of the term "Districts". I know the rule of "Show don't tell" applies heavily here, but I couldn't fully explain this concept in-story without it looking and sounding out-of-place and cumbersome. If you just want to jump into DOE chapter 5 and onward with little reading, here's the tl;dr version.

Link if image is broken: Empire Districts

The super rich people live in the core, which is made of the North and South districts, and the less-rich and poor people live in the outer rim, which is made of the East and West districts.

Longer version:

Each district specializes in something: North is elite business, South is elite entertainment, East is middle and lower class business, and West is middle and lower class industry. The east and west districts are divided by several different border gates, which were originally meant to stop illegal workers, but were later re-purposed to serve as guard outposts to maintain security between the districts during times of unrest.

Now, about the latest chapter.

Chapter 5 took around 10 hours to make, start-to-finish, so I hope you like it. A surprising portion of that time is editing (1-2 hours), and fixing mishaps and small errors in the story. This took more time the usual though, due to Google Docs import being broken. All of my bold tags get reversed, and my center align tags apply to everything for some reason. Because of this, I decided to just put in the formatting code myself, and copy-paste. I hated it. If there is a better way to do this, please let me know.

Next DOE chapter might be a ways off, as I have another one-shot in mind that I want to start on.

Happy Reading,
DeejayShuffle

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