Ya again... · 8:48pm Sep 13th, 2012
No but really i'm still thinking what the hell to do next I only came out with 3 things
1.) I do the Big Mac thing ( I have no idea how I will do it but IDK.)
2.) I have sex with the spa ponies really don't want to do another sex parts but whatever.
3.) I just walk out of the spa and go somewhere else like... to Fluttershy's house or back to Cheerilee the one pony I have not have sex with ( with good reasons.)
I don't know what I want to do anymore if I do the Spa twins that would be also really hard. ( That means two things.) but then it's another 3way blah blah blah. If I do the Big Mac part then it will be something different It's kind of like payback for what I did to all the other ponies I guess. ( My girlfriend came up with it not me.)
Or I can just leave the spa and just go back to Cheerilee and keep talking to her or something like that. I have no idea what I should do next and I need a little help I guess....
SIDE NOTE: I changed the story picture to Rammus Because I love him as a Tank in LoL. and I changed my account picture to one of my fav songs by PlentaKill her voice is..... God I love it I listen to it every time I write my fanfic. So ya.... Kind of need help :I
Well honesly if you go with 1.) then I'm not going to read that chapter cause of obvious reasons. If you go with two then you eally screw up whatever kind of plot you had for this story of I'm guessing a real relationsip wih your character and Twilight bu you kept getting side tracted ith constandt sex with vaious ponies. And at that point if I was Twilight's friend or Spike then I'd side with Spik too and say you don'tdeserve a shot with Twi. You blew every chance you were given and had sex with mos of Twilight's friends alng with total strangers. So go with option 3.) It is the only safe choice.
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KK then I guess ill do number 3 then. I guess you are right about the whole Twilight thing. I kind of forgot what the hell was happening in my fanfic anyway. So I guess it is the best and safe way. <.<
just have a small spa, it would be tricky for the twins to know what to do with a creature they've never come by and finding big mac there. which should be odd. you could give him a little dialect for than the usual "eeyup". he could be embarrassed or proud. he could have been there for a specific reason. you could skip sex for this part, make it more for explanations and talk. in that way you would have unlimited possibilities for the next part over.
i still don't get the "revenge" part. unless big mac was set up by somepony so do the unspeakable then it isn't really "revenge" for anyone. it would be ... a scenario. i say 3.
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Ya makes more sense and the whole revenge thing was my GF's idea for me having sex with all the ponies IDK why my GF picked him but meh whatever Ill just go with number 3 seems much better..... Just need to know where the fuck i'm going to go next I'm guessing Cheerilee or something I need to come up with something by tonight I plan on finally starting it.
358639Instead of him going to see Cheerilee how about he wanders around and by chance whinds up at Vinal's pad? Ya he can meet Vinal and for once show restraint against sex by not having sex with Vinal. And better yet Twi could be happening to walk by and hears your OC's voice inside Vinal's house so Twi looks threw the window to see you regeting Vinal's advances then leaving. Where then the OC sees Twi is there and Twi can be proud of him and they can go back to her Tree library so Twi can give the OC a reward.
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Okay first.. every time I see OC I'm like.... "wait what?" and I realize it.
Anyway Ya I guess I can do that makes me look better in this story anyway. I just need to find out what the hell Vinal would say at that kind of point. And I do like how I do get a reward for not having sex with another pony.
358704Isn't he your OC? And if not Vinal then anypony, the sexier the better because it makes your OC look better and better. By reward I mean Twi could have some level of sex with you for once.
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Ya I do see what you mean about the reward part makes sense. and I guess you can call Chris an OC he's not a pony but I guess it's still an OC no matter how you look at it. But ya I guess you are right I'm trying to pick if I want it to be Vinal, Lyra, or Cheerilee.