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TacticalRainboom


I wrote some stories for you. I hope you enjoy them.

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  • 456 weeks
    A quick Slamjam postmortem note

    So, the creator of one of the OCs I wrote about just about flipped his lid at me because I gave his character a gay shipping story, ruining his message of platonic bromance and emotionally vulnerable heterosexual dudes.

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  • 457 weeks
    Part 1: Poetry

    “But I hate poetry” well that’s because you’re doing it wrong. A poem of the type that we were told to write in this class is just a short, condensed piece of work that shows who you are and what you do as a writer.

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  • 459 weeks
    Lesson 0: Learn the rules before you break them

    I know full well that I'm talking down to a lot of people in this post--my excuse is that writing it out is also a way for me to refresh the lessons in my own mind. Story tags are because I plan to go back and "grade myself" based on my own advice as i write these.

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  • 460 weeks
    All is right in ponydom

    I know, I said I would do a thing, and then I didn't.

    I will. I promise. Next post.

    But first, I need to share this with you: a friend has informed me that One Terrible Writer has posted all of his stories, previously thought to be lost forever, on fanfiction.net.

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  • 461 weeks
    Knighty HATES him! Honolulu-area baker reveals how to improve your writing with 3 simple rules!

    I’ve seen it a few times, and you probably have too: people will say stuff along the lines of “I bet this person took a community college course in creative writing and now they think they're so great.” It’s a very resonant insult for classists like me. Besides, it’s rooted in fact: the level of literacy needed to pass community college courses in this town is miserably low.

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Sep
12th
2012

oh for christ's sake · 2:36am Sep 12th, 2012

I was rereading some of my own work and I found all kinds of boneheaded ADD-induced errors in Chapter 4 too--between all the hardcore clop, of course.

When I say ADD-induced

Seriously, people just read right over this shit and didn't complain to me about it at all. Are you serial, bronies?

Also there are a lot of flow issues in chapter 4 anyway. Telly bits, unsexy expository bits, etc. Perhaps I'll fix them while I wait for people to write up reviews on the two shorts that are on their way. Like I said, those of you who came in through Long Live the Queen will be happy with these.

You see that sentence up there? The one that I moved past without finishing, leaving it hanging there as a huge, glaring error? Yeah, like that. That's what I mean by ADD-induced. And NOPONY has mentioned it in the comments or whatever. Come on!

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Oh for shits sake Rainboom! you made so many errors its retarded you even get featured! (not really :scootangel:) Are you happy? I complained...HAHA....still reading some of your other stuff....when I get time.

I will "complain" about your transgretions as I find them.......but then again I am no lit major so my crits are worthless.....HA :pinkiehappy:

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the hell are you talking about "featured"

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LOL You Got the joke....hahaha........ Just razzin ya brutha. :pinkiehappy:

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