oh for christ's sake · 2:36am Sep 12th, 2012
I was rereading some of my own work and I found all kinds of boneheaded ADD-induced errors in Chapter 4 too--between all the hardcore clop, of course.
When I say ADD-induced
Seriously, people just read right over this shit and didn't complain to me about it at all. Are you serial, bronies?
Also there are a lot of flow issues in chapter 4 anyway. Telly bits, unsexy expository bits, etc. Perhaps I'll fix them while I wait for people to write up reviews on the two shorts that are on their way. Like I said, those of you who came in through Long Live the Queen will be happy with these.
You see that sentence up there? The one that I moved past without finishing, leaving it hanging there as a huge, glaring error? Yeah, like that. That's what I mean by ADD-induced. And NOPONY has mentioned it in the comments or whatever. Come on!
Oh for shits sake Rainboom! you made so many errors its retarded you even get featured! (not really ) Are you happy? I complained...HAHA....still reading some of your other stuff....when I get time.
I will "complain" about your transgretions as I find them.......but then again I am no lit major so my crits are worthless.....HA
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the hell are you talking about "featured"
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LOL You Got the joke....hahaha........ Just razzin ya brutha.