Teaser to chapter one

Fire .Fire was consuming everything in sight,there were metal panels rods and glass shards everywhere. Satellite tried his best to move but right as he attempted to do so pain shot throughout his body.But that wasn't the worst part,the worst part was the silence.He knew he should be hearing something crackling fire, metal scraping, glass hitting the ground...but he didn't. He tried to call out. Nothing. The fire danced around him,it's heat close to scorching his skin,and getting ever closer.At this point he couldn't breathe,the smoke strangled him.He looked around but his vision was clouded for many reasons,ranging from smoke,to his current dizziness. Satellite dove into his memory to recall why he was here...and he remembered.Quickly regretting trying to remember,and he lost any will he had,and slowly sunk into his seat,and not to long after,a voice called out
"I think i see them!"
Satellite didn't hear the person,and honestly,he wouldn't of cared...he just didn't care.He sighed as he finally blacked out.

(This first segment was done a long while ago,but here's a teaser because this intro is literally the only thing I kept from the original chapter. I'm rewriting because even though the word limit was met, I hated the way it turned out,was paced too quickly.
Besides,I probably have to get every ones permission again for character usage)