WE NEED MOAR!!!

HEY!

YOU!

DO YOU LIKE OUR STORY?

YES?

DO YOU WANNA READ CHAPTERS EARLY?

YES?

THEN PRIVATE MESSAGE ME AND BECOME A BETA READER! CHAPTER 2 IS ALREADY UP FOR BETA READERS, AND CHAPTER 3 WILL BE UP SOON.

Oh, oops. Forgot to disengage my canterlock. Derp. But seriously, I want feedback so we can fix up the story before we post it for the general public. And chapter 3 will be ready for beta reading soon. Like seriously. We're putting the final touches on writing and then I'll start organizing it and stuff. But in the meantime, please please please beta read chapter 2. I'm getting really tired of combing through it over and over looking for grammar errors. So yeah. Please help me. And if you help me, I'll have more time for writing. And if I have more time for writing, more writing will get done. And if more writing gets done, then more story gets done. And if more story gets done, you get to read more. So we all benefit.

Also, to make reading this worth while, I'm gonna reveal my two character's special powers:

Scipio: power of sound. Can control sound and create sound. As he slowly learns to control his powers, he will be able to do devastating sonic attacks and eventually learn to control other types of waves (yes, I'm thinking seismic waves. EARTHQUAKE TIME). Oh yeah, and he's an earth pony.

Jonathan: Mind powers. Aside from doing basic unicorn telekinesis stuff, he can project his mind and do fun stuff like that. As he learns, he will be able to cloud other pony's minds and perform devastating mind attacks, including immobilize and confuse. Can share memories with others. Eventually will learn to erase or alter memories.

Yeah, i know this sounds op, but just wait until you get a whiff of what they're facing. Its BAAAAAD. And totally op.

spu313