Opinions needed.

I could fill time and words with the vague and boring goings on of what happens in the next few weeks of the pregnancy... Arguments, hormones, Vinyl almost getting chased out of town because of her features and beaten within an inch of her life so I'd have to have the [sad] and [dark] tags added...

OR

I could skip to the birth/hatching and introduce the foals and let them adjust to life together with 8 foals and trying to plan a wedding. The story ends after the wedding buuuut I'm planning on picking up with the foals a few years later in another work.

Comments

[Cheer]

I like the second option more myself.

[LovingTolerance]

Write whatever you think readers will get more out of.

[Fictional Critic]

U.B
I am in preference of the second option. Though I am not one for the whole dark style, so I cannot say which would get more readers. In all honesty you may get more readers from the first option.
Sincerely;
The Fictional Critic.

[Tigan]

Screw readers, do what fits the story. And, from the sound of it, looks like the latter option.