Beta Readers, Progress · 6:35pm Sep 8th, 2012
Hey Everypony!
Its spu313 from The Collective again!
Just wanted to say that work on EoPE is moving along nicely. We are pretty much done with chapter 2, BUT we need beta readers! Its a confusing chapter and we want to make sure everyone can understand it. If you want to beta read, just pm us and we will happily send you a link! Please, please, anyone reading this, please consider beta reading. We will love you forever.
Also, since chapter two is mostly done, work has begun on chapter three (and we've dabbled in chapter 4, SCREW linear progression and making sense). I've also picked out my favorite line that I wrote:
"...You're not from around here, are you?"
"Nope. In fact, I think I'm from another dimension."
Lol yay Scipio. When it comes to reading Scipio as a pony, be prepared for conversations between his active mind and pony subconscious.
Pony subconscious? What could I possible mean by that?
Telling you would ruin all the fun. But it includes automatically adjusting to saying everypony and hoof and such. Sorta. Also has some other things included. Like Scipio's split consciousness disorder. Its ok, Scipio was already supposed to be slightly batshit crazy.
So, koopastomper's fav line that he had written:
“I was mashing berries to make jam for the pastries I bake; it kinda looks like blood doesn’t it?”
She liked a hoof, “I’m a vampire, I’m gonna drink your bloooooooooooooooooood!”
Don't even ask. Cause I don't want to explain. You'll see sometime when we release whatever chapter that's in.
ThePriest is lame and forgot his fav line and he's out to lunch and I wanna post this now so I guess he just doesn't get to say. Oh well.
spu313 out.
OH YEAH!!! I forgot something. Unlike a lot of HiE fanfics, we're not gonna be like "and then they became ponies. Don't ask questions because LOL MAGICU" Eventually, down the road in a couple bajillion words, the characters are gonna learn how they became ponies. Still working out the technical details, but its gonna be intense. I think. It might also be boring. Whatever.
spu313 out