Need Help · 4:30am Jul 5th, 2016
So, I understand that my stories might be a bit... choppy, but I have decided not to give up on something that can help me improve that. I need help guys, and I'm looking for anyone who is willing to help me improve my stories.
In return, I'm willing to do any collabs or throw around a few ideas that float around my head to help other stories if asked. If it will give me more experience in writing, then I'll be happy to oblige.
In other news, I'm torn between on either continuing BoM, or putting that story on hold and start a new story. If anyone wants me to continue BoM, then, please, let me know.
However, if you guys want me to start a new story here are some ideas I have:
1. Kingdom Hearts Unchained X: I've been having this idea on having my KHUX avatar, two years in the Keyblade War, show up in the EG world.
2. Personal OC: I've had this idea for a while. I wanted to give my OC/D&D character an adventure in Equestria. It would start off over one thousand years before the show, and pick up during the season three premier.
3. Ponified HiE: Yes, I know this has been done over a thousand times, but I wanted to do something simple without having to create some complex character with exisiting powers. Writing this could help me in character development.
4. Warhammer 40K: I wanted to see what I could do with my Eldar character interacting with Equestria, utilizing the powers of the Warp to bend reality, and being considered more insane than Discord. This would mostly be an experiment to see what I could do with a character having the powers close to a god, and letting his insanity loose on the world.
There, some of the ideas I've had swimming around in my head after a few creativity streaks. Let me know if you guys want me to start any of these or continue BoM.
That's it for now. As I said before, if anyone is willing to help me improve my stories I will gladly accept the help, and, in return, help with anyone else's stories to the best of my ability.
This is Crylax Winterra, signing off.
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What sort of help are you lookin for? Ideas? Grammar? Dialogue?
Do I want you to continue? Well duh. Your story hasn't even gotten started yet! Not to mention, (assuming my character made the cut for audition) my character might appear! Go Pink!
Still though. I don't want you to continue the story out of greed. Your story hasn't gotten a real chance yet. Nurture it. Brainstorm. Set a goal for the story. I always feel like something to work up to in the story helps to motivate.
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Thanks for the motivation. I'm mostly looking for help on content; mostly what my characters would do in certain chapters. I have a basis of what I want to happen in major plot points, but when it comes to chapters in between those I can't seem figure that out. I also would like help with character interaction. I have an idea of how my main protgonists would interact with each other (considering the fact that they are basicly myself and three of my friends in an alternate reality), but, when it comes to other OCs, I fear that the interactions might lack luster.
Concerning the audition, I will say that I plan on having Pink Flash make an appearance, but that probably won't happen until later in the story.
I suppose, now that I have some motivation, I can figure out where to go in BoM. However, I will not deny any ideas that may help the story become of higher quality. As I've said in the past, this is mainly something that I do as a hobby, or to improve my writing skills.
I really appreciate the advice, and if there is anything that you need help with in any of your stories don't be afraid to ask. I'm willing to pay back with ideas from my multiverse of an imagination for those who help me.
Also, if I do finish this story, what would you want to see next out of the list of ideas?
Will of the Eldar. Mainly because I think it'd be interesting to see this warrior type character thrown into a peaceful world. How he'd cope with it, and cope with his warrior spirit's boredom. Keeping his lust for killing in check at all times... well... as long as other's are looking anyway.
A good suggestion might be filler chapters. I know that sounds bad... but maybe chapters where side "quests" occur. Maybe they find someone in trouble. The big bad villain sends a particularly devious minion after the heroes. They go on a clue hunt to find something relevant to their main objective.
This setting seems to be modern. Perhaps some infused who use the pony's powers for evil. Robbery, assault, among other things. OH! A particularly interesting idea. Perhaps an infused goes bonkers. Thinking this is some sort of "Highlander" thing. Where he'll get stronger if he kills other infused. (Even if that's not really true.) The pony he's bonded with would plead with him that he's wrong. This isn't the case. The crazy infused wouldn't pay attention and attack the main character.
This would be a good idea seeing as our hero is fresh in the game. Fairly weak. (Yes, the crazy infused would be weak too.) However, our main hero might use magic early in the fight. As the readers noticed, that weakened Dusk quite a bit. So a weakened Dusk and Twilight fighting the crazy Infused might make for a decent scene.
Well. If you want a good basis for how Pink Flash acts, I do have my story that features Pink Flash. If you don't want to read it, I'll be more than happy to answer any questions you may have. I see you do plan to have Pink Flash appear. Will he be integral to the plot? Join the main hero as a party member? Merely be seen for a moment? Will he be bonded with an infused, or will he not be bonded, but we later see him bond with someone?
Here I am, dribbling on and on and on. Sorry for all this. I look forward to hearing from you. : 3