An update

Now I know this is bad for views and what not, but I'm winging this story. It's just a total mash up of ideas that pop into my head, meant for fun rather than a super serious story attempt, as you might tell by the horrible flow between paragraphs. But I think with some practice at writing, this will be a pretty okay story, and I do plan on working on more, just when my keyboard comes in.

Comments

[GamingZebra]

Not a very good idea man, I must say. One of the most important things you can do in writing is PLAN. It may be difficult at first, and I'm starting out too. But the easiest way to start is just have a beginning, middle, and an end. Then work more ideas into the plan and you'll have an easier time writing and you'll have an easier time knowing what to write and overcoming writer's block. If you don't plan then what'll happen is, is that you'll write down a bit then be stuck for a while and then you'll write the next little bit and it really just won't come out well. I know you said it's meant for fun but it still needs to be decent and well-made for people to enjoy it.