revisions complete!

Finally done revising! Wheeheehee! Now I can continue the story.

Sorry for the delay -- staffing Dragon*Con, returning to work, and my current 12 hours of classes at a new college has taken priority, so look for updates every couple of weeks or so. The next chapter kicks off Pinkie's involvement in the story, and I want to do Pinkie Pie justice because it's hard to write for her correctly. : )

Thanks for hanging on so far, and let me know if I've made any mistakes anywhere. ^_^