First chapter will probably be up soon

The first chapter for the story that I am writing called "Rise of a Reaper" will probably be up as soon as one of the regulators for the Chess Game of the Gods group can look at it to make sure it will work. Here is a teaser of it:

-As I raised my head above the surface of the water, my heart stopped.

Circling my sister was a large group of Diamond Dogs. And judging by the net launchers some of them were carrying, and all the fan fictions surrounding their habits, they were going to take her prisoner her to work in their mines.

“Get away from her!!” I roared, charging the nearest one.

As he swung his spear at me, I instinctively went to block, feeling something slide out of my forearm above my hand. When I looked up, I saw that a blade had protruded from my arm, blocking the blow from the spear.

While I was distracted, didn’t see the other D-dog coming up behind me until I felt a sharp pain pierce my body. Looking behind me, I saw that it had stabbed me in my back. As I collapsed, I heard my sister scream, both from being encased in a net and seeing me be struck down.

“What we do with female?” one of the dogs asked.

“Take her Gem Fido. She work mine, find us many gems,” another dog said, presumably their leader.

As the world began to fade, all I could do is watch in pain and horror as they drug my sister away, kicking and screaming.

The last thing I heard before succumbing to the darkness’ embrace was the sound of footsteps drawing close.-