The characters

The story is currently waiting moderations inspection, but if it passes or not I'm positive I'll fix it and publish it if there's any problems with the layout, but don't worry about that, those are my concerns. The characters of the story are named Xander, Justin, Jerald, and Austen, (Xander's the main character) the story has two chapters put in just so you can have around 4,000+ words to read while I work on the others, (which won't take long since I have plenty of time right now) but when it is released please, please, PLEASE, leave a comment on what to fix, I want this story to be enjoyed, I want this to be a great story, and I need your help! That's all I'm leaking out regarding to the story, which should be checked on soon.