A Review: When The Ponies Bother me by Crystalline Star MLP · 11:35pm Mar 15th, 2016
A friend of mine, Crystalline Star, published a story a while back, called When the Ponies Bother Me.
Overall, it was really funny.
So we start out with Sunrise hearing a thud and a pony singing the TMNT theme. She gets really annoyed. Since I dislike TMNT, I can sympathize with that. So she calls her friends that we don't know the name of. The next day, the colt comes up and he is wearing the mask that "Mikey" wears. The inclusion of #EpicRainbowWolfRageFace was really funny.
To those who don't know what that is, it looks like this... 
This is my art!
So she somehow grabs lava, and pours it into the colt's chimney, lol! Then she realizes that crystals don't burn with crystal lava so she gets a bomb. It was hilarious when she said, "what a glorious sight."
And she calls a friend named SB. I personally think we should know who SB is. But Crystalline told me she would have a story with SB as a main character. Hooray!
Then she sees Awesome Blue outside her door singing nursery rhymes... But she actually has Awesome's hair color incorrect...
The white one on the top right is the one she told me was Awesome Blue. You could clearly see that his hair is blue, not green. Unless his hair is different in the story, the word "green" is incorrect.
Chapter 2 was also funny. The figure in the first part was not revealed to me, but she told me the figure had blue hair. 
Aaanyway, Awesome is apparently failing three classes at school. This goes with Crystalline's belief that boys at her school are stupid. So he can't use the toaster, and Sunrise makes it for him. The toast is first wet, but Awesome loves it. The second piece, she put in with a metal sheet. The toaster exploded, LOLOLOL.
The bonus scene... ooooooh boy. This was pretty amazing. It was really funny and I was laughing for a straight five minutes.
When The Ponies Bother Me was a hilarious story, and I liked it. I approve, Crystalline. Nice job. 
Cute. Thanks.
Hey LunaTuna. You found me on colors, I found you here. Please don't call me Sugarcoat
3947419 Hey, what do you mean, don't call me Sugarcoat? You are Sugarcoat, silly! If you weren't, why would your colors account be something with Sugarcoat in it?Lol, but anyway, hi, Sugarcoat. Glad to see you.
3947423 Augh Luna you are evil.
3947424 Sugarcoat, my name isn't evil, my name is Luna.
3947425 unproductive argument is unproductive. Seriously, this conversation is going nowhere.