I'M REWRITING MY STORY · 9:12pm Jan 22nd, 2016
I'm rewriting the story because I levelled my writing skill and my level. I beat trolls as my blog will show (it was fun) and saw more good shows, and now I know how to make my story better. I am ready for ROUND TWO! Also I changed Oak's personality to be less scared and weak and lame. I know he was scared but he's the hero, and he should be cool. But not perfect, which is why ponies react. And he has a new hat, making him not a recolour any more! But is he too different and turning off the kids?