After reading my old work I've decided to re-write everything. I found a lot of holes and areas where I know I could do better. I'm glad t o know that Fimfiction is a place where one can try a hoof at story writing and see where it leads. From now on I plan to go further in depth, create better characters, and go for the gold while I'm here.
Happy birthday!
Other than it being Human in Equestria, I like the story idea.
>mfw HIE
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