To all favoriters (If that is a word) Of 'A Beautiful Melody' · 4:57pm Aug 15th, 2012
Hey guys, sorry I haven't been updating recently. I just haven't really felt like it for a while now and no work has been done, I have only about 500 words written. But I am writing this to bring good news because I wan't to tell everypony that I am devoting this day on my fic! I will not rest 'til it updates! (And if you're bore as fuck, well you're in luck. 'cause you have my tumblr [Link] (Lol Shane Dawson reference.))
And I am also gonna post the little bit that I do have here... Troll for all who ignore the blog posts!
Chapter 4:
“Hey Pinks” I said softly as I entered the room completely and closed the door behind me. Pinkie's head shot up and looked at me with dried up tear marks visibly on her face. She didn't answer, she simply sobbed even more. I slowly walked closer to her trying to stay calm, fighting my own tears back. I was now directly in front of her, heart racing faster than ever before I started to talk. "Do you wanna talk?" Seriously... That's the best you could come up with. I scolded myself trying to think of another way to start the conversation.
"I would like that." The pink pony said to my surprise, and even with all of this she was still able to crack a smile.
"Okay!.. What should we talk about?" Very very stupid move there Vinyl.
"I dunno, you're the one who asked." She replied now giggling. I was amazed by how she reacted, I guess she really is the element of laughter.
"Well, I just wanna start off by saying that I'm sorry, I never should have treated you that way. You really deserved better than that."
"It's fine Viny', I forgive you."
"it can't be that easy Pinks, there must be something I can do to make it up to you."
The party pony thought a little, then a devilish smile spread across her lips. Normally I wouldn't be scared but, this is Pinkie Pie. "Okay then, how about you and I go and pull a couple pranks. You up for it?"
Thank Celestia it was only that, I loved to do a couple pranks every now and then. "Alright then, I guess I can do that."
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So there we were, at the town center hiding behind a water fountain waiting for our first victim to walk by. Our weapon of choice, a toy turtle ment to squirt water when we push on a pad. Pinkie said she wanted to try this prank with Rainbow Dash, but they didn't do it because the target would have been too sensitive for the joke.
Everything was ready! All that was left was an unknowing pony to walk in front of it. "There's one." Pinkie whispered as she got ready to push.
I looked up to take a peek at who the target was and I spot her. Is that Octavia, the mare that I met at the train station over in Canterlot? What is she doing in Ponyville? The mare was getting closer to the fountain but I was so caught up in my thoughts that I blocked everything but the mare. All of a sudden I heard a scream. Quickly taken out of my daydream I look up to see Pinkie on the floor laughing and a very wet... Octavia!
The grey pony heard Pinkie laughing and trotted over to the other side of the fountain. I hid myself on another angle where she couldn't see me. "Pinkie! Why did you wet me!" She said as angry as ever. "And you too." She said as she started walking towards me.
After seeing me she had a shocked look on her face. "H-hey Octavia" I responded.
You canceled your story?
Say it isn't so! I really liked it too. And chapter 4 at least the bit you have so far keep up the good work. As for me well I am spending a lot more time on this one chapter so my next chapter will be enjoyed by all. :) keep me posted.
325952 Well I didn't cancel it I just took a 'break' because I am too busy. I have my tumblr to atend. I get lots of pic request, and not to mention my animated series I'm starting I just have absolutly no time. I do work on it a little, but it's just not a priority.