Slowly progressing forward.

Good man Raryn got through another buckload of grammar mistakes, typos, and generally stupid ideas of mine, so we can deliver you chapter 2. I like to think that I've learned something from him so hopefully the upcoming chapters will be less flooded with various errors for him to correct. If you enjoyed the story so far, you should go hug him, or something (I can't do that myself, Atlantic Ocean got in the way).

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[Raryn]

I'll see if I can have the next two chapters edited by the end of the month for ya.