A quick update · 5:56am Aug 13th, 2012
Hello fellow pony enthusiasts. I've been really busy as of late (not the only one I'm sure) and the next chapter of my fic is coming along kind of well. More like I am starting to loose interest again but I am trying to get my ass motivated to get back into it again. I want to finish it so I can have it taken off my list of things to do. But its kind of hard to get motivated when there are hundreds of similar stories out there that are better. Its not a bad thing don't get me wrong. I pretty sure a lot of you feel the same way or not.
Anyways, here is a short preview of chapter five
A large group of pegasi dotted the skies over the land. Captain Power Strike flew in the lead with a look of determination on his face.
A guard flew up to him “Down there!” a guard pointed down with his hoof towards the ground.
On the ground a PFC looked up through the binoculars and spotted several objects in the sky
“Sir we got incoming!”
“How many” asked David
“Fifteen no wait, twenty. I am counting twenty!”
“Twenty what?”
As they got closer he got a better view
“Um, I don’t know how to put this sir” said the PFC
He looked up and seen horses with wings
“Oh great, they can fly too!” he thought to himself
“Guns up! We got incoming!” yelled out David
As the objects came closer they became clearer, they had golden armor all over their bodies and golden helmets with blue hair on top. The rangers had their guns pointed upwards ready to fire. The guards came swooping down at them and then landed on the ground surrounding them. The rangers had their rifles pointed at each and every one of them. David had his M4 pointed at the guards. Two guards stepped out of the way and the larger pegasus stood a few feet away from David. He had his wings spread wide trying to intimidate the humans. David had his hand out and with a lowering movement signaling the other Rangers to lower their guns. The large pegasus looked around at the other humans and then looked up at David as he walked past by him. He stood in the group and spoke with a deep voice.
“Which one of you is the alpha?”
David lowered his gun and stood right behind him and cleared this throat
“I am”
The pegasus turned around with his wings still spread out. Though David was 6’ 2, the pegasus’ head was chest level. He looked up at David and he looked back down at him, the two of them eyed at each other trying to stare each other down. What it seemed like forever Power Strike spoke
Oh Danm shits going down son
I now the whole "not motivated routine" all to well, just try to have fun writing it. That works for me anyway