My first (lol nope) good Fanfiction!?!?

I AM WRITING A FANFICTION THAT ACTUALLY DOESN'T SUCK BIG OL' HORSE FECES SO FAR.

SADLY, IT IS NOT MY LITTLE PONY. THIS WILL BE MY FIRST NON-MLP FANFICTION.

What is it on you may ask? Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain.
It's a rom-com between Big Boss and Revolver Ocelot. It seem to be really good so far. I will need a pre-reader since I awful at knowing when to do paragraphs. If you like MGSV and can pre-read, just tell me. If you want to read it I will make a doc of each completed chapter soon.