Hive of Three Minds · 4:19am Nov 7th, 2015
Following some enlightening comments on Hive of Three Minds, the story has been taken down for editing purposes. I wasn't happy with the amount of silly mistakes so I unpublished It while I work on it. Sorry for the inconvenience. Next time its republished it will be with a new chapter (or two) as a way of saying sorry.
No need to be sorry. Really. Story had a good premise, just needed some editorial work. Nothing super bad, just some small tweaks and maybe some paragraph re-arranging.
I'm looking forward to seeing how awesome this draft is :)