Need a favor

Hi there and thanks everyone who followed me after the Crystal Fair. If you can't tell from my page, I don't have a lot of completed works, and the ones that are complete are my early works, so basically they stink.

What I really need is feedback. More than "looks good" or "not bad" I really need to know, what am I doing wrong, what am I doing right, and even if it's not wrong, what can I do better.

I want to be great at this, but nobody ever tells me what I still need. Hopefully someone here can do that.

Thanks.