Aug
3rd
2012
HELP PIX! · 11:37pm Aug 3rd, 2012
Okay I have bad news...... My computer derped on me and lost all of part 11. That's a good and bad thing.
Good thing, I did not like part 11 they way I was writing it. It could have been better if you ask me.
Bad thing, I have to write the whole god damn thing again.
BUT seeing that i'm not good at writing sex parts or clop parts ( as you can see) I'm going to need help Like give me some ideas or something I'm going to need help with it. AND A LOT OF HELP..... Sorry
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Evil Rainbow Dash · 185 views
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Why dont you carry from where you left off, chris about to be violated by cloudchaser and her sister when he is locked in the room
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Yes I know that but like I said I have a hard time writing sex parts that's my problem
its easy man just imply since cloudchaser and her sister ar drunk they start making out with each other and go crazy and chris is obviosly watching
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I see
or get creative like one idea they sort of dominate chris he gets tempted or something like he does not want to go with it and jumps out the window and lands on a bush hurting himself onky to let flutershy tend to is wounds and other things
or he jumps out the window and goes back to the party and heads toward the drinks and is suprised by cherrilee or vinyl i got tons more
268530 So its seems you liked the idea it came out great