An idea...?

I have an idea for a fic, I'd love to hear everypony's opinions on how it sounds.

A Needle in a Haystack: It's hearts and hooves day, and Braeburn is still left without a special somepony. He keeps searching and searching, but can't find any other colts that would fill the hole in his heart. It seems like seeking for a needle in a haystack, and it's going to be hearts and hooves day alone. Again. But maybe he's searching in the wrong places. Maybe his needle isn't on the ground, but above his head, in the sky.
(its a soarburn story)

If you guys think it has potential, i'll write it. If not, i'll throw it away in the ever growing pile of fics that havent been writen >.<

Comments

[The Brony Writer]

You could post this on the group called The Idea Factory, a group specially designed for submitting ideas for fics for other people to use!
Just two things:
1) The group creator called Thespurgin has this whole template thing going on, so look at somepony else's idea to get the template.
2) Put in the description that this is a BraeburnXStallion story as to not confuse anypony.