So, I fixed the first chapter of my non-pony story today

I rewrote the entire thing in third person and changed a few details about the story, setting, and characters to give it more life. So far, I only have two likes on it and 48 views. Well, sometime from 6 until now, an editor of the site placed it their top picks (which updates regularly, but only the better stories are picked). Good thing I changed it when I did.

If anypony wants to read and support, here's the link: Kim, Below Memories