Tweaks 'n stuff (to Ch. 3)

If anyone actually liked the previous version of this chapter, I apologize, but after sleeping on it and getting some insight on what I had wrote (beyond the obligatory proof reading), I found I just couldn't take it seriously. It was hilariously bad. Maybe it would have worked for something like Friendship is Witchcraft, but I just couldn't tolerate it for this. So I made some changes that I'm feeling somewhat better about now. (Like seriously, I couldn't even watch the episodes with Zecora in it without cracking up (not in a good way) whenever she had screen time.)

In fact, writing that new ending alone gave me more faith in my ability to write a fourth chapter, which I will start on tomorrow.