Pinkie not being a bearer scene rewrite · 12:55am Mar 26th, 2015
It was brought to my attention that Pinkie was a bit out of character and that the scene with her being rejected as a bearer was a little forced hopefully this edit will fix that. Also here's a tidbit of the edited scene involving Pinkie.
When the two returned to the residency the lights were out and the door was unlocked. When the two entered the lights came on and several ponies jumped out and yelled surprise while a cascade of balloons, streamers, and confetti fell from the ceiling. On the wall there hung a banner that said, Welcome Dusk Shine the stallion pretending to be a mare.
Twilight’s color drained from her body as she looked at that sign, but Fluttershy began to start giggling. The mare seemed to find something funny about all of this and twilight wasn’t sure she liked that fact. Her fears calmed down when the Pegasus started speaking to the crowd.
“Sorry everypony. It looks like Pinkie made a mistake. This is Twilight Sparkle and her guard Dusk Shine is currently out right now. I hope that’s alright.”
The crowd nodded accepting the mare’s story especially when Twilight and a few of the other mares that she met that day confirmed it. The mare they called Pinkie Pie didn’t seem too ecstatic when the reveal was covered up. Twilight was busy getting a glass of punch when the pink mare walked over to her.
“What do you think you are doing?” The mare asked sounding slightly irritated.
“I’m sorry did I do something wrong?”
“If you count ruining my stallion pretending to be a mare party then yes something is very wrong. Nopony ruins a Pinkie party. NOPONY!”
“I’m sorry, but everypony here seems to be enjoying themselves anyway.”
“True…but I-I’m still not happy that you ruined my theme.”
“Well maybe you could have chosen a different theme?”
“Sorry as soon as I noticed you I said ‘I will tell as many ponies as possible about this weird stallion in town cross my heart and hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye.’ And I am unable to break any promises that I make.” The pink party pony said before disappearing as if she never existed.