Ahroohgala!

This is a sorta-followup to the blog post Goongala! and the story I mentioned therein.

Due to issues with how I had the initial story treatment written conflicting with how I want to do the story now, I've shelved the original version and am doing a second take at the story with a different process of character introduction.
I am also looking for a proof-reader that understands I'm going to be doing the story (initially at least) as present-tense instead of past-tense, to help point out flaws and continuity glitches I might have missed during my writing and editing.

Depending what goes on, I might make each Chapter a "day" in-universe, or split the events of a day (particularly from multiple viewpoints) over a few chapters. But that can wait for now.