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Crisy101


More of a commentator than a writer. Oh I also love to do art, check it out http://Crisy101.deviantart.com

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  • 479 weeks
    Me and Writing Have a Complicated Relationship :/

    Soooo I don't know if anyone reads these, but I figure I'll update.

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  • 485 weeks
    A Dazzling Defeat Preview

    You remember that Sundagio series I was talking about in my last journal, ya well I've really been having a ton of fun with it, and to be honest I can't even really call it a Sundagio series anymore, it's starting to focus on the other characters just as much, and have other shippings that get just as much attention. I'm really excited! Anyways here's the preview for the first story, enjoy!

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  • 486 weeks
    Happy New Year!

    (Will add more emoticons later, right now is too lazy)
    Okay so I know I'm late, anyways I felt I'd do a quick update. So I've been gone for a while, Ya I tend to forget I have this account with actual stories on it a lot, as much as I love to, writings never really been my forte. Anyways first off Thunderstorm sequel!

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  • 529 weeks
    Where I'm going next

    Alright so I've had this idea for a fun project for a long time and I'm thinking I'll be starting it soon. It will basically be a book designed to be kinda like a book you'd find in Equestria with information every non-pony would want to know. Like there could be on on magic and how magic works, and i'd be designed like any other informational book in Equestria…..well except it wouldn't be boring

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  • 536 weeks
    To Meadow Creak We Go! Possible Next Story Info (no spoilers)

    Alright, so I created Thunderstorm as just a sweet little one-shot. I was actually creating as part of a challenge I gave myself to create a shipping story for each pair of shipping's between the main six. However after starting to create the story, I wasn't very sure I really wanted to continue on with that challenge. I mean really, that's 15 different shippings! Besides after creating that

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Jan
10th
2015

A Dazzling Defeat Preview · 8:04am Jan 10th, 2015

You remember that Sundagio series I was talking about in my last journal, ya well I've really been having a ton of fun with it, and to be honest I can't even really call it a Sundagio series anymore, it's starting to focus on the other characters just as much, and have other shippings that get just as much attention. I'm really excited! Anyways here's the preview for the first story, enjoy!

The three sat in relative silence for a while, munching on their taco's as their minds all whirled with thought.

“So, what's the plan?” Aria broke the silence, turning her attention to Adagio.

“Plan....” Adagio drew out distantly, as she folded her wrapper up to throw away.

“Ya, the plan, what do we do now?” Sonata added helpfully

Adagio let out a deep sigh as she closed her eyes in thought “I....” She attempted, but nothing came

The two Sirens stood, shuffling awkwardly as Adagio remained silent.

“We......we do have a plan, right?” Aria questioned, giving a sideways glance to Adagio.


“I...” Adagio attempted again, before letting out a deep sigh of defeat. “I honestly have no idea.”

“You don't have anything” Aria cried out in shock.

“.....No....” Adagio confessed, deciding to plop down onto the ground.

“Ugh, Great I guess we're just condemned to die then” Aria half shouted, throwing her hands up in exasperation, before laying against the cold stone surface of the statue.

“Die?.....But we're not going to die are we?”

“Of course we are, our hearts are broken! How else do you expect us to pick up negative energy?!” Aria shouted, glaring angrily at Sonata

“M-maybe we could find another way to harness energy?” She suggested.

“Oh ya like what? Without our voices it won't do us any good!”

“Well....what if...uh....what if we lived off taste food?”

“Taste food? Do you even hear yourself? There's a reason it's called that idiot, it's just for taste, with no nutritional value whatsoever! She yelled, barely constraining her anger.

“ARIA STOP!” Adagio called out, pointing towards Sonata

“Bu...But.....” Sonata squeaked, eyes beginning to shimmer. Nothing coming to her mind, she did the only other thing she could, letting out a loud cry as unshed tears began flowing down her face

“I don't wanna die!!!!” Sonata wailed, sinking to her knees.

Aria's stood wide eyed at the scene, stepping back uncomfortably. Glancing over she saw Adagio glaring at her “ I....she was the one..........Ugh Whatever” Aria gave up with a huff, plopping onto the ground beside Adagio. Adagio continued to glare at her for a few moments longer as the girl looked anywhere but at Sonata. Letting out a sigh, she searched through a bag she had for emergencies, and handed Sonata a teddy bear.

“Here, it's okay Sonata, we'll be fine. I'll figure out a solution, just give me time”

Letting out a sniffle, she yanked the bear from Adagio's hands and hugged it tightly. Why Sonata had taken a liking to the silly thing was beyond her, but it worked well to calm her down. She supposed that was all that really mattered. Except this time it didn't....or at least not as much.

“Hey Sonata, c'mere” Adagio said flatly, motioning the girl to come forward. She quickly obliged, laying herself down into the eldest Sirens lap, ceasing slightly in her crying.

Adagio glanced back at Aria, who seemed content to to stare up at the moon, some of it's light leaving a glimmer in her eyes. Or at least it would appear that way, but Adagio knew better. Carefully, and deliberately, she stretched out her other arm to rest around the distant Siren.

Aria turned her head sharply at the gesture, but quickly returned to her gazing with no further protest.
Adagio observed her carefully for a few moments, knowing something was up for her to willingly accept the gesture. Looking between the two, she could see similarity, though they expressed it in different ways, she could see them both hurting. Letting out a deep sigh, she closed her eyes returning to thought. There had to be another way, something she could do to get them out of this mess, there just had to be!

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