I had a story, and a single person said "I would read it, it was good" so there, im done, thats it im only doing blunt reviews, and commenting now on. Im better at that anyway. Probably no one is gonna read this, I aint mad.
Where on this site do I look, I tried Authors-r-us, Authors needed, etc. But nothing, nothing but apparent 12 year old saying I should quit and kill my self because "grammar and script format" is so easy for them to fix that they won't even bother because it's so easy, im doing this on a phone, I have no time, I have not that much skill in writing.
I don't FULLY understand EXACTLY why the empire is so bad, yeah there a bit evil-ish in how they handled there work but what exactly made them so evil in the first place?
You mean before they revealed they had built a planet-destroying super weapon? I think it was because of their control. Think of it as North Korea in space. Did you see the stormtroopers? They were everywhere, restricting public freedom. Not to mention their rise to power by the death of almost a hundred youngling Jedi.
Annakin killed the children, did palpatine say "Ani, kill them for the empire" the planet destroying device was stolen intel from mustafar and mygeto(not 100% sure it was mustafar) and north korea why? Because there aim is off(just saying) and (not sarcastic) but where where they restricting freedom, and what were the "freedoms" they were restricting?.
You mean before they revealed they had built a planet-destroying super weapon? I think it was because of their control. Think of it as North Korea in space. Did you see the stormtroopers? They were everywhere, restricting public freedom. Not to mention their rise to power by the death of almost a hundred youngling Jedi.
Annakin killed the children, did palpatine say "Ani, kill them for the empire" the planet destroying device was stolen intel from mustafar and mygeto(not 100% sure it was mustafar) and north korea why? Because there aim is off(just saying) and (not sarcastic) but where where they restricting freedom, and what were the "freedoms" they were restricting?.
What started the thought of rebellion is what im asking