First fimfic, "The Dream Catcher"

This the first fic I've ever written, so here goes.

This fic is inspired by an OC I created not long ago for rp, but it was turned away. Instead of ditching the character completely, I gave him his own story.
Here is the description for the fic:

Pipe Dream was raised by the mountains in a cabin home by his two parents Jeebies and Heebie. Always taught superstition and fear, Pipe Dream chooses to change everything after a long while of being teased by his fellow schoolmates. Growing to rise above his fears, Pipe Dream slowly makes a new life for himself. But all the while, his brother Loose Cannon has allowed fear to control his actions, and now has become irrational and dangerous. Pipe Dream must follow his aspirations, regardless of how far away they seem, and become who he must be in order to confront his brother and set things right again.

I have some ideas of how the story will work out up till the end, so I'll be working on that for now. So far this story starts out pretty dark, but eventually Pipe Dream will grow by overcoming his fears causing the book to become less dark as it goes on.

I don't have any pictures or art to use for this fic, so it will probably be going pic-less.

If you have any thoughts or suggestions then please post them!