• Member Since 3rd Jun, 2012
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Neutralbrony


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  • 534 weeks
    Im alive.... for some reason

    Sup everyone. No one remembers me but I've decided to post an overdue story that I started last spring and never got around to publishing it here. Its still incomplete but if you wana read it, be my guest. I have been busy the last 7 months in the enlisted US Air Force. I dont know if Im here to stay but I wana try and make this one story work. See yah later!

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  • 587 weeks
    Does anyone else want a good story?

    So.... its been many months since I've written another fim fanfic. Due to belief that I may be dead, I actually have another story mostly lined up and just in need for editing. My only question is, does anyone want to read it?

    Hint: One of the characters is a very cute and still yong grey begasus with a particular eye sight unlike any other pony ;)

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  • 612 weeks
    Would Anypony Miss Me (Coming Soon)

    To anyone who reads this, I am writing to let you know that I am trying my best to finish this series for those of you might still be waiting to find out what happens in the end with Fluttershy. I feel sort of like I'm being forgotten with the more time that passes on without a new chapter post. It sucks when you have work to do for the summer. I hope that at least one other person on thi site is

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  • 618 weeks
    Thoughts on my current series

    Hey, so I know that it may seem like I am being lazy with this series (which is partially true) but I just feel the need to explain something really quick. You see, for ever chapter I post, it usually takes me about 2 weeks for each part to get done. I write 4000 words per part, have my editor work out the kinks and grammar issues and then finally have it posted. I had an original plan for the

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Jun
26th
2012

Thoughts on my current series · 11:30pm Jun 26th, 2012

Hey, so I know that it may seem like I am being lazy with this series (which is partially true) but I just feel the need to explain something really quick. You see, for ever chapter I post, it usually takes me about 2 weeks for each part to get done. I write 4000 words per part, have my editor work out the kinks and grammar issues and then finally have it posted. I had an original plan for the first few chapters which went well, but then I sort of had to make things up as I went along to make it seem depressing, but now I am trying to build up to the part where things get better, not 100% sure how to do that though.

I would like some help and have you guys tell me what you all liked about in the series. What was good/bad? What were your favorite parts? Do you like more of a mellow drama or a one with more action and adjectives used to describe a scene (as I have used a bit of both)?

Some feedback will help me complete chapter 6 which is now going to be released on 7/2/12 so I appologize for the long delay.

Many thanks to those who favorited my series! ;D

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Comments ( 3 )

The melodrama is good. I can't speak for everyone, but I'm hoping to see Fluttershy's internal conflict and her friends trying to make her feel safe enough to tell them everything.

It is close to the saddest story I have read. I love this story and hope you can keep up the good work.

198032 Much appreciated. Thanks!

199091 I'm glad you think so, I will put forth my best effort

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