Hello and story help maybe

Hello everypony I'm MoonLightDazzle and I'm new here so if anyone has any tips they might want to share I would be very thankful for them and also I want to ask y'all something I have this story it's a adaigo X Aria and I was told to post it on here by a friend but I don't think its good enough to go on here so if anyone wants to read it and tell me what they think I would be very thankful for there help so that's about all for now but yea I look forward to hanging out with you all.....peace out bronys and PEGASISTERS