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ShadowShrike


Gamer, Story maker. Oddly enough can't stand watching the show.

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  • 466 weeks
    Why many stories Fail

    If you plan on writing a Story, Write a Map. You need to know where you are going before starting the Journey. Many Writers on this site create a Character, then throw them into Equestria or other setting. Many times I can see that a story like that I know it will Die. Know where you are going.

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  • 501 weeks
    Military Story Fails

    Once in a while you will see a story pop up where the protagonist is in Equestria, and they have weapons and vehicles, which require fuel and ammo. Usually the writer will circumnavigate the INDISPENSABLE need for a supply infrastructure, by saying regenerating ammo, unlimited fuel, ect. This irks me because the writer BLATANTLY throws this in your face that he's circumventing this need.

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Oct
11th
2014

Military Story Fails · 4:56pm Oct 11th, 2014

Once in a while you will see a story pop up where the protagonist is in Equestria, and they have weapons and vehicles, which require fuel and ammo. Usually the writer will circumnavigate the INDISPENSABLE need for a supply infrastructure, by saying regenerating ammo, unlimited fuel, ect. This irks me because the writer BLATANTLY throws this in your face that he's circumventing this need. Military cannot survive with out this infrastructure. Maybe lack of ammo and fuel won't stop the character, but wear and tear will. Example: the Me 262, the German jet fighter of WWII, had engines that lasted about 20 hours before the burned up and had to be replaced. So if the engine factory was destroyed, bye bye 262. That is why the allies bombed the hell out of German, to destroy its ability to make war. Do not cheat the system if you want to make a good story.

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