Critiquing

Alright. If you're reading this I'd appreciate it if you all were as harsh as you can on what I write.

The last time I remember writing fanfics, I remember them being crude and absolutely terrible. As I write, I want you to help me point out all the stuff that's wrong with my stories so that I can get better. When I do get better, it'll show on the Chapter-Based story I'll be working on.

...or, ya know, just read it and move on like nothing ever happened...