Another Update · 8:32pm Dec 29th, 2011
Allright, for the past days after Christmas, I went through part one of the story and completly edited inside out. And as the comments say... yes, I should've had a proofreader. I laughed my ass off when I saw I said Canterlot was the place where the Best Young Flyers competition was... however I think this was pretty good being that OOALH was the first actual story I've written in my free time.
I'm gonna try to send it to EQ daily, and if they say it still needs to be revised again, I hope I can find somebody else because I'm not going through that frustration again.
Yeah... I havn't even start part 3 yet, which is my bad, but I promised myself I would start tomarrow.
Everybody makes mistakes ^^
But I'm glad you're working on it ;) can't tell you how much I'm anticipating the next one atm !
No stress though!
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I'm really glad you like it. You won't be disappointed I promise