MFW dislikes>likes

I'm a pretty amature writer, and I have a very unique style in that very few people like how I write things.
But seeing the ration of 14:3 in dislikes:likes? BROKE MAH HEART
Hah, I'm kidding, I hope you realise that. I'm happy to improve via suggestions and whatnot from people, and constructive criticism helps me improve as I've been trying to do over the last... However long since I started writing.My layout is wonky as heck because I'm so used to writing in a Roleplaying fashion and it helps to draw attention to certain areas in the piece of writing.
It is, however, terrible for story format, and I apologise wholeheartedly for that. I'm not even sure how I'm going to build up EoF properly, even though I know exactly how the end is going to go down. ARGH, writing is too much stress, I quit!

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Okay, just had some caffeine, my fix is sated and I'm ready to continue with Chapter 1. I hope that it will be better than the Prologue. XD