First fic review: Equestria Noir · 10:34pm Jul 3rd, 2014
Third attempt at rewriting this review, FML. I really hate the blog writing template.
Equestria Noir Case 1 "The Big Macintosh Case", by Jacoboby1.
Plot: A murder in small town Ponyville, a family divided, and a secret going back to Ponyville's early days. Detective Private Eye has the skills, the knowledge, and the cunning to solve the case. Accompanied by Twilight Sparkle the two hope to solve the mystery and put a stop to a plot against the town. But will Private be able to outrun his past or will it catch him in the end?
It has a great plot , plenty of twists to keep you going. And since it's only 20,940 words, you can read it in an hour or so. 9/10
Characters: Well written OC's and great interpretations of the shows characters drive this fic like a bullet train. 10/10
Grammar: If there are any mistakes, I don't see them. 9/10, just in case someone points one out.....
Enjoyment: Insanecrusader recommended this to me, and I loved it. 10/10
Final score: 9.5/10