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Hey everyone, just finished the first chapter of The Difficulty of Saying Goodbye. I plan for this to be a slower, deeper story than my previous works so if you get the chance to check it out please do, and if you like it up vote.

Which brings me to a pet peeve of mine. when people down vote my story without any explanation of why. I don't mind the down votes however I would like to learn from my mistakes to make a better story.