Chapter 2 Part 2 · 7:55pm May 28th, 2012
Hello my dear readers!
It´s finally time!
I finished the new part of the story 'Rising of Destruction'
Here the stats:
It has, including the header and the song text, exactly 9069 words, that were exactly 387 words more than in the first part.
It has exactly 5 scenes, 4 main scenes, where one is two-parted, and 1 intermediate scene.
The first three scenes are at the Canterlot graveyard.
The fourth scene plays in a train and in Ponyville
And the last scene plays one more time in Canterlot.
My grade of happiness about writing this blog is about thousand percent after investing feeled one-hundred hours of work.
The most appearing characters are Twilight, Bleach and the Villain with totally 3 scenes.
And now to the content:
As promised, I added a song to the funeral-scene. The song is by 'Unheilig' and its name is 'Geboren um zu Leben'. It may is a german song, but I used the english version in the text. The english translation for itself is not by me but by the group 'Gregorian' and is called 'Born to feel alive'.
Out of the english version of the song is also the part´s name 'Born to Live and Die'
I´ll add the german version of the text as comment in the story, together with a link to the english song by Gregorian.
We´ll also see a special side-character of the series in this part, namely Octavia.
I associated a special connection of her with one of my OC´s, because I realized during writing how similiar they are. This connection is without a meaning in this story, but I´ll use it in my other story 'Halcyon Days'.
And, of course as promised, we see Spike again. He´ll now be a permanent companion of Bleach and Twilight and take his part as a main character.
I now could explain every scene detailed, but I´ll only keep vague to don´t spoil too much.
The first scene is, as I announced it, Silverleaf´s funeral with the song. During the song, We can hear/read the thoughts of four ponies, saying good bye to the filly on their own way.
The second scene is very past-heavy. It goes about Bleach´s past, especially the story about his try to drown himself after his mother had died.
The third scene is the intermediate scene with the villain. Because it´s a short one, I don´t say anything more.
The fourth scene is the two-parted. The first part is in the train, a chat between Twilight, Bleach and Spike on their way to Ponyville.
The second part is a 'mute' part. It has no dialogues and describes the arriving at Ponyville. To its end, I simply have to say: I´ll answer every question relating to that with 'NO!' You´ll figure out, what I mean...
The last scene is back in Canterlot and shows the defined last scene with Nevio. Here I hope, I haven´t overdone it, you´ll see what I mean.
Anyhow, I wish you, as always, very much fun during reading! ^^
The next things I´ll work on are the next part of 'Halcyon Days', the draft of the next part of 'Rising of Destruction' and my new story, which is developing very well and where I maybe soon could begin writing on.
At the end of this blog, I want to thank one of my inspiring songs, because I recognized that I´m hearing it very often lastly.
It is Scaretale by Nightwish.
This song always is a good help during scene´s with my villain. Also it will be very inspiring for some nightmare-scenes in my new story.
Also the complete draft of the library-scene is basing on that song.
And it´s the song with my favorite trumpet parts.
It´s also kind of reminding at 'This Day Aria'. Even Anette Olzon´s voice is very similar to Evil-Cadence´s.
All in all, that song means very much to me, so:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR EVERYTHING YOU´RE GIVING TO ME!!!
Grateful
Your Ivo