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Hawkeye364


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  • 406 weeks
    Account proboms

    So I just recently got anew phone,and since joining this site I've never oncelogged out of my account on my old phone. ( which I'm currently using to type this) and my old yahoo account is way way old and idk how to change the password or access it so the best obition I have is to make a whole new account all together. I'll have to go and re-fav all my stories I read over my time spent here but

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  • 521 weeks
    Follow me New Story?

    OK! So, yeah....my first story I talked about about in my blog, it didn't happen, and I have a reason for that. After a while, I started to write the first chapter of "A Flutter's Star" but then I stopped due to school getting in the way, that was 34 weeks ago, and I been thinking a lot. Through out the weeks I been thinking of my oc Jet Star, and let me tell you, I have a whole story thought out

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  • 555 weeks
    " A Flutter's Star" first story soon to come

    Hey everyone Hawkeye here, and i'm here to tell you I will soon be posting a new story, now this isn't really my FIRST MLP story, I have written a few others, but they never got to make it, so when you see the prologue of my new story " A Flutter's Star" i'm sorry of how bad it will be, and some miss spelled words, and a bit of grammar issues. Jet " Dashing" Star finally has come to Ponyville to

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May
9th
2014

Follow me New Story? · 3:22am May 9th, 2014

OK! So, yeah....my first story I talked about about in my blog, it didn't happen, and I have a reason for that. After a while, I started to write the first chapter of "A Flutter's Star" but then I stopped due to school getting in the way, that was 34 weeks ago, and I been thinking a lot. Through out the weeks I been thinking of my oc Jet Star, and let me tell you, I have a whole story thought out for her its crazy. So this new story is about Jet Star, and her daughter, "Almata" Golden Shields, moving to Ponyville. Now for Jet's love interest, I'm going to make it Applejack, since I love Applejack ;v; and with how my plan has been going for Jet Star so far, she would be a perfect love interest for her.

Jet star is 3 years older than Twilight, the aging in my story is a bit different, So if you don't like how I do the ages in the story, sorry about it. Jet's full name is Jet "Sparkle" Star, why is that? That's part of her story, at the age of 8, she was adopted into the Sparkle family due to something happening, so at this point in time, Twilight was 5 while Shinning was 13. I see Shinning being 8 years older than Twi, and 5 years older than Jet, I been thinking about this age part a lot and I think I got this done!

Ok! So onto the story idea, Jet Star was the daughter of Thunder Bolt Shield, and I had trouble with her talent, her cutie mark was original gonna be her as an expert in the wing cast spell, but then I changed it to where she joins the Royal Guard and she uses the spell help her in combat. She joined the Royal Guard due to wanting to protect the ones she love and because of how great of a caption her father was before the indecent happen, now as for Jet's daughter, how she came to be. Well that's also part of the story too, she explains to the Main 6 (Minus Twilight) how Almata was born and who her father was, why? Well Almata is a Pegasus. Jet Star is a Unicorn and Almata's father was a Unicorn too, how was she born a Pegasus? Well, it has to due with Jet's father, he was a Pegasus.

What I have plan, is for Jet wanting to move to Ponyville to be closer to Twilight, and for her daughter to have a better life, being a single mom is hard work after all, and when you got you baby step sister there to help you, its a big help, but when you also got her friends to help you, its a big bonus. As for the CMC, they will be 3 years older than Almata so she is 5 when she moves t Ponyville, so Jet Star had Almata when she was 21 or 22 years of age. So, the story will follow the two as they live in Ponyville, i'm also making this an alternate universe, this will be set around Season 2, before Shinning's Wedding, or maybe during Season 3.

So! That's all for now, i'm still thinking of a good way to start Chapter 1 off, or the Prologue off, this story i'm putting all my effort into it, I want this story to be good, so here's a little description of the story!.....That I just came up with


My name is Jet "Sparkle" Star, and I want a knew start. Why? Well it's more for my Daughter, with me raising her alone since day 1, it's kinda hard to do that in Canterlot, so i'm moving use to Ponyville where my sister lives at. I'm hoping i'm doing the right thing for my daughter by moving, it will be a new start for both of us, i'll work at the Ponyville guard post, raise enough bits to make a living. My life so far has been...well....messed up really....what can I do? Will this place be right for both me and my little star? Dad...please watch over us as we start our knew life in this small town.

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