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NeXus Ramos


Tell me what you think about my stories and ask me what to write for you guys. hope you like them and don't blame me if they suck. im new at this. but I got loads of ideas and some of them are awesome

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May
2nd
2014

[no title] · 6:23am May 2nd, 2014

Day 1;

You're name is Nexus.You're a young 16yr old male. Your left eye is blue and has a scar over it. Your right eye is red and your hair falls to that side. Your hair is a kinda brownish color. You're pretty slim if you say so yourself. You're wearing a black tee shirt and black shorts. As you wander through a very dense forest, you can't wonder what you were doing there. As the matter of fact, how did you get there in the forest? The last thing you remember is walking through the park near where you live. You were suppose to meet a girl there cause she said she wanted to "talk" . You also remember seeing a flash of bright light hitting you. You suddenly think to yourself,"Wait, did I get hit by a car? Is that it? Is this just a delusion made by my own mind trying to cling on to survival?" You have always been overdramatic. You give yourself a little pinch to see if you're really dreaming. You feel a soft pain in your arm and realize that no it is not. You try to think of all the different scenarios, mostly the ones that make sense. Strangely, you come up wit none.

You've been walking for quite a while and you haven't noticed you came across a small cheerful bright town. You start to run towards it. But stop as you realize that something is wrong. You then notice two animal next to each other. They seem like.... ponies? You start to get a bit closer for a better view and "Snap!!!" you step on a branch making a noise loud enough for the animals to hear. They start to walk towards to where you stand. You look around to look for a hiding spot but fail to find one. The ponies reach around the corner and "Hey girls! Hurry or we'll miss the opening sun ceremony." Says someone. The ponies turn around to whoever said that and yelled out,"Coming!" as they go off and leave me alone. I let out a sigh of relief. I tell myself,"Whew, thank god that they left. If it hadn't been for for whoever spoke to them, they would have found me. Wait a minute, did one of those ponies just speak?

You hide behind bushes and houses as you follow the ponies to some weird kinda house. You peek inside to find a whole crowd of ponies gathering and talking to each other. TALKING!!! I look around again and it seems that they're waiting for something. The crowd suddenly goes quiet and another pony starts talking to the others. You instantly think,"Is this a cult of super animals? You start to wonder what else changed. You look around and see the moon and see a unicorn on it. Suddenly your head starts pounding and it feels like your whole brain has been shattered. It takes a while before you can do something. You look back up to see there is nothing up there on the moon. You look back at the door to see a dark spirit of some sort leave the place. You start to follow as it goes around town finally it leading you back to the woods. You take a deep breath and head inside.

You keep going, feeling that you'll find the answer of how you got here with that spirit. You know you're not on earth anymore. You need to find a way back because there's alot of things you haven't tried. You go through the creepy dark woods, creepped around some weird mixed creature past a cliff, over a river, and past a bridge. You arrive at a ruined castle. It seems like nobody has been in there for a while. You suddenly hear a noise coming from a different part of the castle so you hide behind a drape or a flag. Suddenly the ringing in your head becomes higher, louder. You start feel a bit faint. You just then notice the two ponies in front of you, A dark, evil spirited one and a lavender one. The dark spirit one says something but you can't understand her, due to your massive headache. She send out a weird dark ball at the other lavender pony. For some weird reason, you jump in front of the lavender pony, trying to shield her, taking the damage head on. You're sent flying thru the air crashing into the wall, hitting your head as you start to lose conscience. You feel a sharp sting from the blast. You feel the last of your power slipping as you fall into a deep abyss.

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