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  • 517 weeks
    Elements of Shadow Update

    So... how are you guys? I'm pretty good! It's very beautiful today! Ok, I can't hide it anymore. As many of you guys can tell, my story Elements of Shadow is my worst story. It seemed better in my head. So, there is a very high chance I might cancel it. I mean it's already on hiatus, so that's something! If you have a good reason why I shouldn't cancel Elements of Shadow, let me know.

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  • 517 weeks
    My New Idea

    So, I was originally going to take Queen of the Bats of hiatus and just work on all three stories, but I looked at Elements of Shadow, and I don't really know what to do next in that story. So, I need help. Should I just keep Queen of the Bats on hiatus, have all three stories be worked on, or put Elements of Shadow on hiatus.

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  • 517 weeks
    IM BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

    I'm so sorry for being gone for an entire month. I was playing my video games I got for my b-day. Also, next week I'm going to a waterpark, but I will try my best to make updates. Also, my updates are mainly going to be on After is Sad. Also, I am planning to take Queen of the Bats of hiatus. Yay!

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  • 522 weeks
    Taking a Break

    Well, I know I was taking a BIG break, but I need another break. I'm so sorry, it's just next week is my birthday, and then I have to celebrate Flippy Day (Which is on Friday the 13th) and next week is just busy. Also, I need time to think about the chapters for my stories. So, I should be ready two weeks from now.

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  • 524 weeks
    My Thoughts on Maud Pie

    First of all, sorry for the wait!

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Apr
27th
2014

My Thoughts on Rainbow Factory · 2:02pm Apr 27th, 2014

This was one of my first creepypastas. My oldest sister was talking about it and I wanted her to show me. So, she pulled up a video with someone reading it.
Here are my thoughts.

When I first was starting to listen to it, I thought I was going to be pretty creeped out. That didn't happen. In fact, this story isn't much a creepypasta. It has some great character development and good detail. I liked how they made Scootaloo the main character, and how she fell in love with ORyan. I almost cried when he died. However, great things have flaws too. One flaw is having Rainbow Dash be apart of the Rainbow Factory being a surprise. It just doesn't work. I'm not saying Rainbow shouldn't be apart of the Rainbow Factory, but it just doesn't make a good twist. I haven't read the sequel yet, but I might in the future.




Overall Grade
9/10

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Comments ( 2 )

You should read, Cupcakes.:pinkiecrazy:

2052989 I know! the gore wouldn't bother me, i watch happy tree friends :pinkiecrazy:

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