My Thoughts on Rainbow Factory · 2:02pm Apr 27th, 2014
This was one of my first creepypastas. My oldest sister was talking about it and I wanted her to show me. So, she pulled up a video with someone reading it.
Here are my thoughts.
When I first was starting to listen to it, I thought I was going to be pretty creeped out. That didn't happen. In fact, this story isn't much a creepypasta. It has some great character development and good detail. I liked how they made Scootaloo the main character, and how she fell in love with ORyan. I almost cried when he died. However, great things have flaws too. One flaw is having Rainbow Dash be apart of the Rainbow Factory being a surprise. It just doesn't work. I'm not saying Rainbow shouldn't be apart of the Rainbow Factory, but it just doesn't make a good twist. I haven't read the sequel yet, but I might in the future.
Overall Grade
9/10
You should read, Cupcakes.
2052989 I know! the gore wouldn't bother me, i watch happy tree friends