Redoing the whole thing

So, after posting two chapters of my fic and having done some more work after that, I discovered just how badly written the first chapter was and the second one wasn't much to cheer for either.

I have therefore decided to re-write the whole thing. For those who have already read it and liked it, don’t worry, the story is just the same and all I have done is to try making it more readable in terms of grammatical, dialog and how the characters are portrayed.

The first chapter will be split up into three now since I notice it’s going to be a bit longer and I guess that also makes it easier to read.