Story Review #01: The Black Parade · 12:54pm Apr 15th, 2014
Hello! Starting with this blog post, I'll be making story reviews every now and then. For today, I have The Black Parade by TheLadyTwilight. As of time of posting, it is incomplete so I will only discuss the first chapter The End/Dead.
Also, I must warn those who will be reading it: mature themes are prevalent. Tread with caution.
Side Note: Yay for MCR references!
When I began to read this, right off the bat I was enticed to continue by the vivid descriptions of Pinkie's situation. Right now, I'm not going to describe that so I won't ruin the surprise. The progression also keeps in tune with the dreary, sullen theme. The ending was one hell of a cliffhanger too, I must say.
The only hiccups I've encountered so far are erratic indentations, misspelling of a few words and confusing me if it was an anthro story or a human story. Those shouldn't get in the way, though, especially the last one. I highly recommend this who those who like mature themes and stories pondering on Pinkie's dark side.
