I'm having some serious doubts about my fic, I really don't know if it's good anymore, I feel as though it's very unstructured and arbitrary, like it's just sloppily made, I really wanted to develop a romance between Thunder and Dash, but I have no idea anymore.
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Well it's your fic, you should do as you please, and it's not unstructured and arbitrary, at least I don't think so.
As for idea's, you could make dashie a super tsundere type, that always makes for excellent awkward situations.
124853 Lol I really though about that, but shes already gone past the point in which I can make her a tsundere, even though I love tsundere's they are adorable, but I will continue, my friend inspired me.
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lol, what I meant was, make her more tsundere towards her friends, maybe get someone else of the mane 6 to like him a little too, or maybe one of the background ponies, develop that side a little untill you've completely made up your mind as to how you'll deal with the RDxThunder situation.
124861 I did think of having it so another one of the characters liked him as well, probably like Applejack or something because of her natural competitive attitude towards Dashie :P
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so my favorite pony and my second favorite both like the same colt, I can see this work,
dialogues... so... many... dialogues...
124871 Lol so much yay!